tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6858983085428585414.post1988506877071473897..comments2024-03-28T17:36:10.591-07:00Comments on Yvonne Osborne's Writing Blog: High StreetYvonne Osbornehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18212188414972694795noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6858983085428585414.post-6790716273041242582011-12-05T09:25:36.625-08:002011-12-05T09:25:36.625-08:00My gawd, Yvonne. This is a stunning piece of work....My gawd, Yvonne. This is a stunning piece of work.Enchanted Oakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815997287116818456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6858983085428585414.post-42747316819209811062011-12-02T04:55:08.214-08:002011-12-02T04:55:08.214-08:00G-Man,
No but I have something else that can be.G-Man,<br />No but I have something else that can be.Yvonne Osbornehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18212188414972694795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6858983085428585414.post-22777172567778925772011-12-01T20:22:15.251-08:002011-12-01T20:22:15.251-08:00You couldn't have trimmed this down to 55 word...You couldn't have trimmed this down to 55 words?<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />....Just kidding, Loved your story!G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6858983085428585414.post-67867260038484494092011-11-29T20:25:24.037-08:002011-11-29T20:25:24.037-08:00Liza,
Thank you so much. If you're with them, ...Liza,<br />Thank you so much. If you're with them, that's a good thing, no?<br /><br />Trav,<br />Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it.<br /><br />Jemi,<br />Thank you! I think he should, but I wasn't sure he would, so I had to stop.<br /><br />JB,<br />Thank you very much. What IS he waiting for? What are any of us waiting for in life's big hesitations? Thanks.<br /><br />Tony,<br />Thank you. I tried to write with honesty, not good, not bad, just real. So glad that came across...Yvonne Osbornehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18212188414972694795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6858983085428585414.post-7051639658090200182011-11-29T19:59:27.443-08:002011-11-29T19:59:27.443-08:00I enjoyed this so much. They became real people wi...I enjoyed this so much. They became real people within the first few lines, not good not bad, just so real. So very good..Anthony Ducehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17476865809734682418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6858983085428585414.post-37230582462545613272011-11-29T16:25:43.559-08:002011-11-29T16:25:43.559-08:00Oh Yvonne, that is some fine writing! Gosh, in so ...Oh Yvonne, that is some fine writing! Gosh, in so few words, you have created two wonderfully eccentric characters...What is he waiting for?J.B. Chicoinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06894797553204276281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6858983085428585414.post-80239338001519077262011-11-29T16:20:06.819-08:002011-11-29T16:20:06.819-08:00Awesome! They're both such unique and REAL cha...Awesome! They're both such unique and REAL characters! I hope he takes that risk :)Jemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6858983085428585414.post-38495150682032679412011-11-29T09:18:05.874-08:002011-11-29T09:18:05.874-08:00Hey, I like that a lot. Very intriguing -- who are...Hey, I like that a lot. Very intriguing -- who are these people and how did they get that way?<br /><br />Very nice.Travenerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05160810997837674165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6858983085428585414.post-11487667682114663982011-11-29T06:23:38.692-08:002011-11-29T06:23:38.692-08:00I am in the bar with them. My heart is longing fo...I am in the bar with them. My heart is longing for him to take the risk, take the chance. The description of the canes at the museum drew me in. This is great!Lizahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16170701034715108039noreply@blogger.com