to probe the right side of the brain,
the forgotten truth
like the secret stash in a gourd,
an elusive wisp of memory
that has no name.
that has no name.
I think for me it's thunder and conflict—
the fuchsia sunrise out one window
and a drowning sky the other,
conflicting scenes a writer commits
to memory
(if he is wise)
to set a stage.
But don't open with the weather,
the naysayers say.
The gravel road shimmers like
snakeskin in the rain.
It glances off the windows
like paint from the brush of a
master.
Could we open with that?
It fills the nesting leaves of the
cabbage
and the newly planted lettuce,
thankful.
Would one care about that?
as summer gives way to autumn,
one pushing aside the other, like leaves
swept from the sidewalk
and spiders from corners.
We write in small spaces
and in the rain and in the dark
and in the morn before the house awakes.
When writing, we don't hear the rain
or see the spiders and the snakeskin road,
or care that the sky has turned from fuchia to gray.
10 comments:
Lovely. I truly enjoyed reading this!
This is just beautiful. I love all your pieces. They're so... colorful.
Oh my. How well you've written it and how well you've said it. The snakeskin road stopped me cold. Breathless!
Beautiful! We really can tune out the world when we write - even a world as beautiful as this.
Lydia,
Thank you so much!
Anne,
Thanks! So glad you like it.
Liza,
Thank you. I was trying to think of the perfect description, and it just came out.
Jemi,
Thank you so much. I think it's truly a gift, to be able to do that.
Wonderful poem! I love your descriptions.
G.Eagle,
Thank you!! You just made my lonely afternoon better!
"Clouds collide like passing freight trains
as summer gives way to autumn,
one pushing aside the other, like leaves
swept from the sidewalk
and spiders from corners."
I just love that. The change of seasons does feel just like that. Makes me want to go for a walk, right now...
A lovely piece.
Thank you
JB,
Thank you so much! Did you get in your walk?
Al,
Thnk you!
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