photograph by Robert Doisneau |
Oh, for war's sweet end,
to be grounded in home,
freed from the smells
of gore—I mean glory.
We kiss and
we kiss
and would do it again
do it all over again,
not me, not us, but them
they'll do it again
for there's always a them—
a new wave of them
who yearn for the glory
of the lock and load,
for the trill of the bugle
and the fame of a kiss.
Again.
This image comes from Magpie Tales, the blog dedicated to honing the pens of poets and writers.
22 comments:
Enjoyed.. You expressed them, and us all, so well.
"...there's always a them—"
I love that line; its truth... its promise that regardless of what happens, they'll always be more.
again....! yes !
Yes, there's glory & a nice story :)
Nicely expressed!
fabulous poem- and thanks for visiting my blog! Cheers!
Yes--one can see a them in both the young and old. Kind of awful. Thanks. k.
There is always a them to take over. A never-ending story but at least with lots of love around it! Wonderful take Yvonne!
Hank
Them.. Yes I can feel the observers feeling - them.
Anthony,
Thank you so much,
Magaly,
Yes, always more, the endless strife. Thanks.
Sandra,
Thank you!
Anita,
Thanks.
Kathe,
Thank you and you're welcome!
Kay,
Thanks. Agreed.
Hank,
Yeah, kinda never-ending. Thanks.
Mama,
Thank you!
Bjorn,
Hey, thanks, I wasn't even considering the observers, but you're right.
Beautiful. Tragic but beautiful.
"...gore--I mean glory"...clever and powerful...
This is one of my favourites!!! Great imagery - and sadly, there's always a them
Jemi,
Thank you so much. And thanks for mentioning me via Twitter. I don't tweet much so that was a special treat.
Taryn,
Thank you! Hey, I like your photo.
Tess,
Thank you so much!!
Yep, there's always 'them'. Whoever they are!
Good stuff, Yvonne. As always :)
Oh, to be young and enjoy first kisses again! Goes from "us" to "them" so quickly!
This touched down deep.
Beautiful description of the young lovers and very thought provoking as well
Great take on what is and is not seen in the photo. A thought provoking write Yvonne.
Wendy,
Hi, and thank you!
Theresa,
Time is indeed fleeting but that's another subject. Thanks for commenting!
Liza,
Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.
Kestril,
Thank you and welcome to my blog!
Mary,
Thanks Mary. I appreciate it.
"the trill of the bugle
and the fame of a kiss."
Brilliant. Makes me think of all the love stories that didn't make it beyond those first kisses.
Enigma,
Thank you.
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