so
we hid in the closet
and
shuttered the lights.
But
he rapped-a-tat-tat
with
his knives all-a-silver
and
peered over the sill
with
a smile like a sword.
It
wasn’t a dream,
wasn’t
a trance.
Next
morning a trail
from
the club foot he favored
dirtied
the snow round windows and doors.
And now for a little history behind my flash 55. As
stories go around these parts, along with the Watkins Man who delivered extracts
and liniments there was a knife sharpening man who came around every few weeks in an old truck with a bell. He had a wheel in the back of his truck he pedaled with his foot, much like a sewing machine, and he would sharpen knives and scissors in a flash for a pittance.
As
children are wont to do, my older sisters contrived stories around the knife
sharpening man, all of them sinister and disturbing to the young child’s mind.
Hence the seed for my Flash 55, much embellished, of course. I’m sure that
the poor man was only delivering a much appreciated service and not peering in
windows.
TGIF
TGIF
27 comments:
oh my...as a kid we would have been fascinated...and made up similar stories....ha....fun 55...
Our Farmer's Mkt still sells Watkins Products...
THE best pepper that you don'r grind yourself!
We had a guy that sharpened all sharp things as well
My opinion on this? PERFECT!!!
As You are also Ms. Osborne...
Loved your edgy 55 Yvonne
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Oh, kids do create the best spooky stories - usually because they are not politically correct. ;P
Whoa, that was scary! Ima might have trouble sleepin' tonite.
Brian,
I bet you would, natural story tell that you are. Thanks!
G-Man,
Watkins is still around, isn't it? And I bet you know your pepper. I have no actual memory of a knife sharpening man, but my sisters do. I can't imagine people like that making house calls. At least we still have the Schwan's Man! Have a great week.
Margaret,
Oh! You are so right. Not politically correct just dreadfully honest. Thanks!
Rasta,
No you won't....just listen to that dripping water!:)
Thanks!
hehe Great story. My older cousins tried stories like that on me. I guess I don't scare so easy, but they sure do. LOL ;-)
Ah! Love a super creepy story!
Whew scary! good one- yup we made up stuff like that too! thanks.
He'll never know you maligned him, and it makes a great tale.
This is terrific, thanks. k.
Well, he may have been totally innocent, but he sounds pretty creepy to me--loved the childhood feel to this, Yvonne.
Nothing like older siblings to create horror stories! I was a victim to that kind of scary story myself a time or two.
Enjoyed..
Oh, my love the ryhme and meter and word play here. And I would love to hear this read aloud on soundcloud or similar.
The first thing I thought of--even before reading the end note-- was my older sister reading me a bedtime story about a man and his knives. Hugs. Sounds like you endured sisters similar to mine.
:) i love this.. and nowadays enjoy listening to my little ones making up stories..
Erica,
Thank you!
Brandi,
Thanks. Me too. As long as I'm safe.
Izzy,
Thanks. Guess most kids do.
Alice,
Thank goodness! Or he might come around....
K.,
Thanks!!
Hedgewitch,
Yeah, The very idea!
Teresa,
I could probably fill a book with all the scary goings-on.
Anthony,
Thank you so much.
Mama,
Thanks!!
Mary,
Wow...thanks! I would too, just not by me. I don't like my voice. Thanks again!
Passion,
Oh, that's funny. Something about knives...makes for a shivery tale.
Thanks!
Lady in Read,
Thank you so much. Glad you stopped by.
Yikes, that's some scary stuff in only 55 words!
Hi Steven!
Thanks. If I can scare you I must be on the right track.:)
Love your story behind your write. Fun. And what an imaginative mind your sister had...albeit sinister and scary to you.
I would never have the discipline to limit myself to 55 words
This is great. What a great local yarn!
Fabulous imagery in a mere 55 words, Yvonne!! What I wouldn't do to have a knife sharpening man come around to sharpen all my (very blunt) knives! (and he could even look in the window if he wanted,I 'd be that grateful!) :)
Wishing you a Happy New Year - hope 2013 is a great year all round!
Judy,
Ha! That's funny. It would be kinda convenient, wouldn't it? Thanks for stopping by. I've missed you! (And busy reading The Fall, by the way.)
Linc,
Thanks so much!!
Al,
It's actually a pretty good exercise. You'd be surprised. I bet you could do it.
Bodhirose,
Thanks. I had five actually! Never a dull moment.
That's awesome! A smile like a sword says sooooo much! :)
Hi Jemi!
I kinda thought it did so thanks for letting me know I wasn't off my rocker. Thanks so much for taking the time....
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