"Two wrongs may not make a right but a thousand wrongs make a writer.”

Friday, January 25, 2013

The First Time (Friday Flash 55)

She bent over him, and her breath was warm and sweet as summer. He bit down on the back of his hand to stifle a moan.

It was late when he left. The moon had set and the sky pulsed with stars. The Big Dipper lined the edge of the world and the world was still. 
 
This is 55 words for the G-Man's Friday Flash 55.
Keep warm and TGIF!

32 comments:

izzy said...

Sounds Grrreat!& Revealing! much better weather too! thanks-

Anonymous said...

Very warm here! Love the first time.

anthonynorth said...

Great passion. Nice one.

G-Man said...

Somebody got laid?
Awwwww, how nostalgically FUN!
The first time for Him or Her?
Sounds like there was cuddling involved as well...FICTION!!!!
Loved your Romantic 55 Yvonne.
Thanks for this very classy sensual Romp!
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Unknown said...

Sounds more like a guys first oral experience.

Yvonne Osborne said...

Izzy,
Thanks!

Razza,
Thank you!

Anthony,
Thank you!

G-Man,
It's fiction (aren't you proud of me?) so it can be whatever you want. Thank you very much!

Brandi,
Ah....you got it, girl!

Helen said...

... certainly right about warming us up!!! :)

Alice Audrey said...

Hot! It has me thinking about what it would sound like without the back of a hand handy.

Yvonne Osborne said...

Helen,
Glad it worked. And no calories involved!

Alice,
Ha! I couldn't write such a scene. G-Man would censor me! But aren't hands handy things?

Other Mary said...

Oh, so sensual...I'm feeling warmer already!

Anthony Duce said...

Enjoyed… played out so well..

Susan said...

Well done, particularly the second paragraph, which brings out that alienation and loneliness.

Anonymous said...

Yes, warm! And wonderful how nature echoes human activity here. K.

Yvonne Osborne said...

Mary,
Thank you! Nothing like warm cozy thoughts on a cold winter night.

Anthony,
Thank you.

Susan,
Thank you. Yes, I wanted that sense of aloneness to come through.

Manic,
Thank you!! I love to do that, blending nature with human activity. Nature often wins.

Anne Gallagher said...

I just love your Friday 55's. Yvonne, you are just so talented. When are you going to publish?

Yvonne Osborne said...

Anne,
I LOVE your comments! Publish? That's the ultimate goal, of course. Soon. I'd like to think soon. Thanks!!

the walking man said...

Was there a first time? I think it happened in stages and I bit my hand a lot in those warm breath moments.

Yvonne Osborne said...

Walking Man,
White knuckled, are you?:) Thanks!!

Jemi Fraser said...

Very nice! So suggestive with so few words :)

Yvonne Osborne said...

Jemi,
Hey...thanks!

Rastaman said...

Whoa, Ima like this!!

Yvonne Osborne said...

Rasta,
Hi! See, I was right. I thought you would!:)

Lydia said...

That was hot stuff, Yvonne!!! I loved this. Really loved it.

Yvonne Osborne said...

Hey Lydia!
Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.

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