as we trace ancestry through the graveyard
and calculate dates—how common it was to bury babies.
who guard their tombs with outstretched arms
or a wrought iron fence to ward off vagrants.
But look how the monied died just as young.
At the rear of the yard are the stones we
can’t read
all the names swallowed up by the cold.
Bare of epitaph, they lean against each other,
even their stones are tired.
Then there are the markers that only bear a
number,
like the tattooed at Auschwitz.
One straggler is off alone and we wonder
if he wanted it so.
The rounded stone juts white from Earth
like a tooth.
And what of those who couldn’t even get
inside the fence—
separated from the gilded, even here.
To celebrate Swedish Nobel Laureate Tomas Transtromer, dVerse's Bjorn Rudberg asked us to write a poem of exactly 144 words, including a line taken from one of the Nobel writer's poems. In case you can't guess, it's all the names swallowed up by the cold.
More at dVerse on this renowned poet and how he captured the long winters of Scandinavia in his writing.
Note: All the photographs herein on my own. No peeping AI on my shoulder with his shudder eye.
14 comments:
This is an excellent reminder of what tombstones may tell (even when they don't)... the most poignant part is maybe those who were buried outside the perimeter.
A very thoughtful write, Yvonne. The artificial barriers really don't matter when we're gone...
Yvonne I am moved by your writing to Bjorn's prompt, itself tucked in to the core of the poem so unobtrusively that I had to hunt for it explicitly.
And each side of it, huge wings of poetry sheltering this so deep concern of each of us, though many don't like to admit to the natural inevitaability of dying and death.I love paarticularly your noticing of the man who had (?) chosen to be out of the main burial area.
I feel happy and reassured that you and your son have been doing this beautiful work of honouring the legacy of those who are now earthed in your local (?) graveyard, by your awe, curiosity and compassion.
What a most appropriate gift to include in your mothering. I'm delighted for your close relationship!
Blessings to you x
I love how you used the assigned line to hauntingly capture the sense of anonymity and loss among the unreadable gravestones in your poem... That was so well done!
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David
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A stunning piece, Yvonne; so much depth of beauty in so few words.
~ Nancy
You did a wonderful job with the prompt. A very smooth transition. Very clever putting the ones swallowed up woth the cold, outside the fence.
Your familiarity with cemeteries allows you to share about them with a measure of homely affection yet doesn't shy away from the ugliness of their truth of how we treat each other, even after death. Beautiful poem, Yvonne.
Beautifully done, Yvonne. You give so much grace to this visiting of graveyards.
Wonderful. I had the urge for a moment to visit a graveyard and maybe sketch some tombstones in a neglected dark landscape somewhere.
Anthony - I hope you find an opportunity to do that very thing, to follow that urge. In springtime when the spirits are benign and the bumblebees roam ...
Yes, for sure. I was so glad I had my camera with me to capture these images. Cemeteries are very interesting places and usually quiet, tranquil and meditative, especially when the spirits are benign and the bumblebees room!!
Thanks everyone!!!
Ah, you capture the quirks and fashions of cemeteries and burial over time and our anxiety perhaps at needing to be remembered/guarded.
PV Cann,
Thank you for commenting!
Your poem reminds me of the Sundays we would walk through cemeteries after church, or just wandering through them on trips, wondering about those who came before us.
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