Steam rises off the
coffee
and an angel peers in the window
to see what I’m
reading.
An owl shuffles along a
branch
and a dog on three legs
sniffs the air.
A stonemason makes
tombstones
and a nurse studies the
human heart.
The dog watches for the
angel
with her bad foot to her
ear.
The city sleeps
on a rush of wing.
on a rush of wing.
A daughter's porch is a calm
oasis
of mint and spider
plants, peppers and basil.
Little pots of sweet
peas awaiting
germination line the
sills.
She moves them around to follow the sun.
She moves them around to follow the sun.
Grandmother had sweet
peas around the well pit
strung up with twine to
support their wandering way.
A weather-worn board we
knew to avoid covered the pit.
We poked around the
flowers and played in the dirt.
They’ve all left.
We’re someplace else
and await the sprouting of two green wings
from pots of dirt
Linked to the Tuesday Platform, why do we travel? And Poets United everybody has a heartache.
Happy 4th of July to those of you here, in the States.
from pots of dirt
Linked to the Tuesday Platform, why do we travel? And Poets United everybody has a heartache.
Happy 4th of July to those of you here, in the States.
18 comments:
Great visual descriptions. Enjoyed
awesome article.
thank for sharing & have a nice day
Anthony,
Thank you. Thanks for reading!
Azka,
Thank you.
Oh gosh this is incredibly beautiful, Yvonne!💖💖 Thank you so much for writing to the prompt. Happy 4th of July!😘😘
Sanaa,
Thank you. It's a pleasure. Happy 4th!!!
Happy 4th July...when I sprout wings they are not going to be green:)
Ral,
Ha, you got me!Thanks for commenting.
Love the focus on the green... it's marvelous when things grow.
Brudberg,
Thanks. Every spring our faith is renewed by Mother Nature.
Loved it all! What a rich and magical life you lead.
What a heartfelt reminiscent poem this is. I so enjoyed that recollection of younger days.
I just love this, Yvonne. Truly..
I enjoyed your ‘Notes From Ohio’, Yvonne, which took me hundreds of miles from my small British landscape to your expansive one. I love all the details, the owl and the dog, the stonemason and the nurse, and especially Grandmother’s calm oasis, so evocative with the scent of mint, basil and those wonderful sweet peas. But I’m left with a question: where did they all go?
Rosemary,
Thank you so much. Sometimes it seems dull and provincial so thanks for reminding me that it isn't.
Old Egg.
Thank you!
Liza,
Thanks. It's so nice to keep up with you.
Kim,
Thank you so much. They're all gone. They being my deceased relations, a list that keeps growing.
Yvonne, I was there, at least until the three-legged dog lifted one leg to her ear. A balancing act like a three-legged stool with one leg missing. Nicely written descriptions and actions which flowed in the with other.
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Such vivid imagery in this, Yvonne. Love the poem!
Jim,
Thanks!
Purple Pen,
Thank you. So glad you like it.
Just adore the porch and Grandma's place... I sunk right into those stanzas!
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