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Friday, January 17, 2025

The Greatest of Lakes If We Can Keep It

 

Sand gives way under my feet

as I bend to the effort

of climbing a dune

on the sweetwater sea.

 

Beyond waving fronds of seagrass

water to the horizon heaves and hurls

plumes of foam that pound the shore.

It polishes stone

and whittles driftwood

burnished and smooth as a baby’s sole.

 

With sand in my shoes

hardpack underfoot

I fill my pockets.

Clouds scurry happily overhead

as gulls ride the waves

like surfers in wet suits.

 

Where water meets sky

the stars and the moon live in the depths

while on a rush of wing

eagle eats gull and feathers fly—

            ferocious predator

            rules the sky

while fox of the bayou

trots over the sedge

to circle his den of many rooms—

            intrepid hunter

rules the beachhead

as Superior turns herself

inside out to bring in treasures

whittled to size by the push and pull

of the big shining sea.



For dVerse, the Poet's Pub, and their Open Link Night, Poets and Storytellers, what does "low battery" mean to you, and how do you recharge?  and What's Going On the writer's blog that asks us to think about the personal nature of homemade gifts, and while they're the best, I think gifts washed up on the shore of Lake Superior might be their equal 

 

29 comments:

Helen said...

I dove headfirst into your poem .... so good I didn't want to come up for air!!! Great write, Yvonne.

Marja said...

Beautiful My way to recharge and take in all these elements of nature

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Such a lovely read! I now feel acquainted with a place I didn't know before, and just reading it helps to recharge my spirits.

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Bad day for the gull. But an entrancing poem, thank you.

Yvonne Osborne said...

Thanks Helen!!!

Yvonne Osborne said...

Thanks Marja. Nature always recharges me.

Yvonne Osborne said...

I'm happy to introduce you to our Big Shining Sea!!

Penelope Notes said...

I like the air of enchantment you gave to life's push and pull. :)

rallentanda said...

No worries about keeping the lake. Canada wont invade and take your share. Although who knows, I suppose Trump could sell it. It has a lot of fresh water in it and he keeps on banging on about water :)

Mary said...

I love how you described Lake Superior! Lovely details that made me want to experience it again!

Rommy said...

This made me think of the Maine shore and happy hours spent admiring the rocks, the waves, the sky, and everything in between.

Sumana Roy said...

Beautiful and scary Nature! "eagle eats gull and feathers fly—" What power! Every image is a keepsake. Thank you for joining us Yvonne.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Yvonne, I love this so much! Amazing that Lake Superior is so huge. I used to fill my pockets with sea treasures too, till I ran out of room. Smiles. I love how like the ocean this "sweetwater sea" is.

Yvonne Osborne said...

Rallenranda, that's why I worry about...water wars, the great siphoning.

colleen said...

Refreshing tribute makes me homesick for my hometown by the ocean.

Anthony Duce said...

So enjoyed. Love all our Great Lakes.

Susie Clevenger said...

I love this. I don't have Great Lakes gifts from the beach and sea, but I have so many things I've gathered from the beaches of Galveston Bay.

Rajani said...

This is so interesting..I didn't think foxes would be near the beaches....now I want to look them up and see their pictures!!!

Yvonne Osborne said...

My sister lives on Lake Superior and between them and the dunes lies a low area where a family of fox reside. They are clever family unit, playful and beautiful and it kills me that some only want to kill them.

Susan said...

"water to the horizon heaves and hurls
plumes of foam that pound the shore" I'm entranced by the images, but also by the sounds and rhythm of the verses that make up your poem. So lovely!

dsnake1 said...

Great imagery.
Makes me want to take a ride to the beach. :)

Sanaa Rizvi said...

This is gorgeously encapsulated! I love; "Where water meets sky the stars and the moon live in the depths while on a rush of wing."❤️❤️

robkistner said...

Wonderful Yvonne — love you friend… 🙂

brudberg said...

I love the way you describe the beach especially the eagle and fox parts...

Ain said...

Lovely descriptive verse about the nature around, surviving...

paeansunplugged said...

So beautiful! My husband has been to great lakes and he says it is sn unforgettable experience.

Yvonne Osborne said...

Yes, like looking out over the ocean with no salt in the air! "No Sharks, No Salt", a popular t-shirt around here.

purplepeninportland.com said...

Gorgeous description of pure beauty.

Dora said...

What a pleasure to read, Yvonne! I felt wonderfully immersed in the imagery.