Sand gives
way under my feet
as I
bend to the effort
of climbing a dune
on the sweetwater sea.
Beyond
waving fronds of seagrass
water to the horizon heaves and hurls
plumes of foam that pound the shore.
It polishes
stone
and whittles
driftwood
burnished
and smooth as a baby’s sole.
With
sand in my shoes
hardpack
underfoot
I fill
my pockets.
Clouds scurry
happily overhead
as
gulls ride the waves
like surfers
in wet suits.
Where water
meets sky
the
stars and the moon live in the depths
while on
a rush of wing
eagle
eats gull and feathers fly—
ferocious predator
rules the sky
while fox
of the bayou
trots over
the sedge
to
circle his den of many rooms—
intrepid hunter
rules the beachhead
as Superior
turns herself
inside
out to bring in treasures
whittled
to size by the push and pull
of the
big shining sea.
For dVerse, the Poet's Pub, and their Open Link Night, Poets and Storytellers, what does "low battery" mean to you, and how do you recharge? and What's Going On the writer's blog that asks us to think about the personal nature of homemade gifts, and while they're the best, I think gifts washed up on the shore of Lake Superior might be their equal
29 comments:
I dove headfirst into your poem .... so good I didn't want to come up for air!!! Great write, Yvonne.
Beautiful My way to recharge and take in all these elements of nature
Such a lovely read! I now feel acquainted with a place I didn't know before, and just reading it helps to recharge my spirits.
Bad day for the gull. But an entrancing poem, thank you.
Thanks Helen!!!
Thanks Marja. Nature always recharges me.
I'm happy to introduce you to our Big Shining Sea!!
I like the air of enchantment you gave to life's push and pull. :)
No worries about keeping the lake. Canada wont invade and take your share. Although who knows, I suppose Trump could sell it. It has a lot of fresh water in it and he keeps on banging on about water :)
I love how you described Lake Superior! Lovely details that made me want to experience it again!
This made me think of the Maine shore and happy hours spent admiring the rocks, the waves, the sky, and everything in between.
Beautiful and scary Nature! "eagle eats gull and feathers fly—" What power! Every image is a keepsake. Thank you for joining us Yvonne.
Yvonne, I love this so much! Amazing that Lake Superior is so huge. I used to fill my pockets with sea treasures too, till I ran out of room. Smiles. I love how like the ocean this "sweetwater sea" is.
Rallenranda, that's why I worry about...water wars, the great siphoning.
Refreshing tribute makes me homesick for my hometown by the ocean.
So enjoyed. Love all our Great Lakes.
I love this. I don't have Great Lakes gifts from the beach and sea, but I have so many things I've gathered from the beaches of Galveston Bay.
This is so interesting..I didn't think foxes would be near the beaches....now I want to look them up and see their pictures!!!
My sister lives on Lake Superior and between them and the dunes lies a low area where a family of fox reside. They are clever family unit, playful and beautiful and it kills me that some only want to kill them.
"water to the horizon heaves and hurls
plumes of foam that pound the shore" I'm entranced by the images, but also by the sounds and rhythm of the verses that make up your poem. So lovely!
Great imagery.
Makes me want to take a ride to the beach. :)
This is gorgeously encapsulated! I love; "Where water meets sky the stars and the moon live in the depths while on a rush of wing."❤️❤️
Wonderful Yvonne — love you friend… 🙂
I love the way you describe the beach especially the eagle and fox parts...
Lovely descriptive verse about the nature around, surviving...
So beautiful! My husband has been to great lakes and he says it is sn unforgettable experience.
Yes, like looking out over the ocean with no salt in the air! "No Sharks, No Salt", a popular t-shirt around here.
Gorgeous description of pure beauty.
What a pleasure to read, Yvonne! I felt wonderfully immersed in the imagery.
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