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Friday, January 3, 2020

A Place Erased


The detour signs led us off the road we knew
and pot holes opened up like sink holes.
Shacks and crooked trailers dotted the road
and the car quieted-
                our children in the back suddenly paying attention.
We’d crossed a border without guards
and entered a country where people sit on porches
and don’t wave.

The road took us deeper into the dappled woods
and curved through hills fit for a travel brochure
but outside the window garbage overflowed the ditch—
            discarded tires and tin cans, shiny pieces
            of broken glass signaling for help.
Dust hung in the air and breached the rolled windows.

Our detour through this country inside a country
made our children put down their games
and ask questions we couldn’t answer.


This poem is my attempt to play "Play It Again" one last time with the prompt from The Imaginary Garden With Real Toads. I selected the challenge issued by Sherry Blue Sky to pen a poem of social commentary.

Also linked to Earthweal a new site dedicated to poetry of a changing earth.