At day's end she folds her blouse
and places it on a footstool.
She raises her arms to receive her nightie
as it floats around her in faded flowers,
blue and yellow, the parchment
of leaves falling to earth,
falling into her lap.
She checks the basket on her walker
for her nightly needs.
The art of submission:
walker replacing cane
cane replacing dancing feet
dancing fee replaced by buckled shoes
that ran through the raspberry patch
whose pointed thorns couldn’t catch her.
She grimaces in the mirror
and yanks a comb through her hair
still black at the nape,
in the mirror of her mind
my mother is young.
5 comments:
Enjoyed. A visual vignette of small paintings of a life in wonderfully placed words.
Oh you painted such a picture. Many years ago, my father said, "You always feel like the same person, until you look in the mirror."
Tony,
Thanks!
Liza,
Thanks so much. He was wise. I have a dimmer in my bathroom!
At our core still lives the young girl, the young woman........I could see her so clearly in this lovely poem. I am reminded of my grandma, in a nursing home, complaining about being among "all these old people" when she herself was in her 80's. Smiles.
Hi Sherry,
Thanks for commenting on this poem. In our minds we will always look the same. The mirror is the enemy of the brain! That's funny about your grandma. I totally agree!
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