Grass won’t grow where the
barrels were stored.
Three seasons gone; it wasn’t easy.
But then it wasn’t hard.
He cleansed the ditches with burning
And crossed the Rubicon.
He took back the cultivator for weeds that don’t
glow in the dark—stooped into his father to embrace
the old ways. With each sluice of the plow
clean dirt is turned. But nothing will grow
on the north side of the shed.
Trees denuded by a weakened sun
are stripped bare as the arms of a refugee.
Unplucked apples, like rosy knuckles,
drop to ground and cling
to the bank of a dry creek bed.
We warm our hands at the burn barrel.
The jovial days of fall—
the kicking up of leaves—
passed in the night some nights ago.
It was a good day for a burning.
But nothing will grow where the barrels were stored
Posted with thanks to Poets and Writers for the writing community they embrace and Earthweal for their open link weekend prompting us to post a favorite poem. I wrote this while my father was still alive. He liked it.
22 comments:
love all your details here, great storytelling. reminds me of running around on my granfather's farm in nabraska, doing chores. those were great memories, thanks for reminding me.
This poem is so atmospheric and must surely kindle memories!
Phillip,
Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it.
Ingrid,
Thanks, yes the memories are vivid and irretractable.
My prompt last week at erthweal included reference to the radioactive plants at Chernobyl. Your poem reminds me of that - the eerie lines about how nothing can grow in that area. I really like the line about the trees stripped bare like the arms of a refugee. Wow. Lovely to have you link at earthweal, Yvonne.
A haunting message driven home by the repetition. Nicely done!!
The third stanza is absolutely amazing - it reads like a novella - I ADORE it
Wonderful evocation of times gone by, the good and the bad (or at least ignorant)and a particular environment then and now.
Sherry,
I'm sorry I missed that prompt, would really have stood my muse on end! I'm so glad you liked this one while I'm a sporadic participant, it's always nice to be amoung like minds at Earthweal.
Rajani,
Thank you I appreciate it.
Margaret,
Thank you! I wish to write a novella.
Rosemary,
Thanks so much. The bad and the ignorant are often co-conspirators.
This is a beautiful poem. I like the details in it, and the way work and labour is described. The poem reminds me of Philip Levine's "Drum".
So enjoyed. Had me remembering a generational family place that was home for so many years.
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So many wonderful lines in this exquisite poem .. I was transported back to the 40s and 50s, memories of the many hours I spent with my grandparents .. and their farm in the middle of nowhere Illinois.
I'm glad I read it too. Good for thinking.
Can refresh on the Rubicon crossing. Where are we?
I'm afraid those barrels leaked something
-Farmers are growing maize and canola plants in
the contaminated soil, they will grow. Also they
lift out the heavy metal, gold can be refined
from the plants.
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Glad you dad liked it, folks tend to like the good things we do.
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I love that this reads like a story, that we get to walk along the speaker and experience all the details. The structure and tone work wonderfully with the theme.
What was in the barrels? Or is an ant colony living there now?
I just listened to Bob Dylan's new song Cross the Rubicon. Was it toxic?
dsnake, thanks so much. I'm off to read Drum!
Tony, Thank you. I think many of us have memories of a family farm in the past.
Helen,
Thanks. I'm still in the middle of nowhere!
Jim,
Thanks so much. I know some things can grow in contaminated soil but I wouldn't want to eat it. But what can be cleaned, purged, should definitely be done.
Magaly,
Thank you. I pondered over this one, structure, etc. so I'm glad you think it works.
Priscilla,
Ah...no ants there. Nothing there. Part figment of my imagination, part knowledge of what goes on in farmland, heavy use of chemicals- herbicides, pesticides, fungicides, suicide. Thanks for commenting.
Colleen,
I'm looking of Bob Dylan's new song before I take another step. Thanks!!
"Trees denuded by a weakened sun
are stripped bare as the arms of a refugee.
Unplucked apples, like rosy knuckles,
drop to ground and cling
to the bank of a dry creek bed."
A perfect stanza of images. Love this, Yvonne!
Purple Pen,
Thank you so much for taking the time. I'm glad you liked it!
dsnake, I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed Philip Levine's poem and thank you for pointing me in that direction. To be compared in the smallest of ways is a huge honor.
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