I need to see the sun’s first light
and flaming slide at the end of day.
I can’t escape my farmgirl sentience—
what it was to fall asleep
to the thrum of the hay dryer
with a pillow cooled at windows of sweet
scent,
to hear the whistle of the freight train
on its rumble through the night
to pick up grain and carry it off.
With hay cut and drying in the sun,
I see those strong boys paid to help.
Heavy bales to lift, throw, and stack;
chaff in our hair, sweat down our backs.
We gathered at the hydrant,
close but not touching. Closer than
touching.
Knee-deep in Queen Anne’s Lace
on a wend among the boulders,
glacial erratic that lined the fence—
worn pocket tops caught the rain
and made a seat for dreams of Oread
hawks and love and common things
and lent a view of the jagged line
of rogue apple trees
that grew along the creek
in unmannered ways,
withstood the winds of winter
and bore uncommon fruit
without the nod of a care from us.
Sharing an old poem about home at dVerse (the poet's pub) and Poets and Storytellers, What conjures up home? Nothing was ever sweeter than the smell of fresh cut hay and first love.
29 comments:
close but not touching. Closer than touching. - what a wonderful line!! The images just dance in your poem!
wow you captured farm live and the environment so beautifully that it makes me want to experience it firsthand.
Your visuals are compelling and real. How aptly you describe "… rogue apple trees that grew along the creek in unmannered ways,"
I love your farm memories Yvonne! I spent my teen years working on my Uncle's farm in PA. This brings back so many good memories of that time. Well done! Thanks for the memories.
Beautiful memories. My aunt had a farm unfortunately hay and I didn't get along. Allergies. I can see the landscape throughout your poem.
So beautiful! There is so much warmth here... wonderful!
"We gathered at the hydrant,
close but not touching. Closer than touching." Love these lines. :)
Beautiful reflections. The apple trees and Queen Anne's lace remind me of my own childhood days.
For me it was the sound of the foghorn and the smell of sea air. I didn't know the name of flowers yet, but loved them especially the Queen Anne's Lace.
So many wonderfully remembered images and thoughts. So many similar or connecting images to connect too. Enjoyed.
You evoke an extremely strong sense of place and time, along with scents of summer to tantalise our nostrils... :-)
You certainly conjured up your home for me in this poem, vividly – and all the love you have for it in memory.
This is so beautiful. So evocative that I felt like I had been there, too--though I don't think I've ever slept on a farm.
Lovely views of your country life
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A beautiful memory. I never lived on a farm, or in the country, however there is a grain elevator nearby, as well as a plywood factory, so I do hear the train whistles regularly!
withstood the winds of winter
and bore uncommon fruit
without the nod of care from us
You are most right Yvonne! There are fruit trees that take care of themselves and survive on their own. Providence decided that they be given the privilege to share their contribution with ordinary folks who happen to pass by.
Hank
Hank, Thank you. And I swear, those apples are still the best.
Lisa,
The train whistle in the night is soothing and conjures up so many memories. Thank you.
Gillena,
Thank you as well!
Merril,
I guess it's a unique eperience. One I used to assume was universal. Thanks.
Rosemary,
Thank you so much!
Jinksy,
Thanks, glad you took that from the poem.
Tony,
thank you so much!
Colleen,
Oh, the smell of the sea would be as sweet! thanks.
Mish,
Thank you and thanks for this opportunity to share a poem about home.
Miriam,
I do too! Wrote this so long ago and those are still favorites. Thanks.
Truedess,
Guess I and all my sibs were fortunate with no allergies anywhere.
Dwight,
Thanks! Those are the best memories. I wish more kids today would get a taste of baling hay!!
Penelope,
Thank you
Marja,
Thanks, and I wish you could!
Rajani,
Thank you...I think they are favorites all along, which is so gratifying.
Beautiful visuals. You have captured the sights and sounds of a rural day so well here. Ah, and those wild apple trees. :)
d'snake,Thanks!!! Those apples are still the best! I could sit in one all day (like as a kid) and eat until I made myself sick.
You brought me right in. Occasionally we hear the sound of a train whistle. So haunting. The only thing comparable is the moan of a lighthouse. Lovely as always, Yvonne.
Oh, do lighhouses moan? Is it the movement of the beacon or just the wind whistling around and through? Thank you Liza so much for visiting me!!
Love this! Your words always weave magic!
For me, home is a yard with fairy rings of mushrooms, pockets of space for hide and seek, and a gulley filled with fun.
A gully filled with fun!?!! Mushrooms and hide & seek....can't beat that. Thanks, Jemi
"closer than touching" - Great line!
I love all the sounds you heard.
Enjoyed the rogue apple trees - I was a farmgirl - alwasy laughed when the "subdivision" boys would come and work for $ - baling hay. A few showed up in shorts - they didn't last long. ha
Well written. With senses used. I liked it.
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The last three lines are delicious. Just how I imagine that fruit would taste.
Purple Pen,
Thanks!!! It seems to be a favorite and I appreciate you commenting.
Margaret,
Oh'1 How funny. Yes, some of those boys didn't know enough to bring gloves but shorts? Oh boy, were they ever in for a surprise! "Subdivision boys", I like that! Says it all.
Nas,
Thanks so much!!
Rajani,
Thanks, and I do.
Magaly,
Thank you! I think I'm about to take a walk and see what gnarly windfall apples I can find!
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